Free writing by jimmy
1) My writing proceeds for project 2 was different than project 1 behave i had to do more research. And once I formulated my ideas i had to look at the reese arch and see if it supported my claim or not, and with that I put those two together to compile my essay. While for my first project i just had my ideas and wrote them down without using research to back it up.
2) It was easier to first do an outline. Once my outline was written i made my first draft off that and after some revision and meeting with you I then made another draft which became the closest thing to my final draft. It was practically my final draft with minor changes.
3) I enjoyed the first project better. I like formulating my ideas and it having to back any of it up with other opinions. The first project was more fun because you got to compare something and that really gets my brain going when comparing something, rather than formulating a claim and then researching and finding things to support that .
2) It was easier to first do an outline. Once my outline was written i made my first draft off that and after some revision and meeting with you I then made another draft which became the closest thing to my final draft. It was practically my final draft with minor changes.
3) I enjoyed the first project better. I like formulating my ideas and it having to back any of it up with other opinions. The first project was more fun because you got to compare something and that really gets my brain going when comparing something, rather than formulating a claim and then researching and finding things to support that .
Well done Jimmy! Extraordinary writing! I also liked writing the first project because I liked comparing my two pieces of work.
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