Action Plan - Kelly Barnes
The feedback I received on my paper was informational and well received. I plan on being more specific in my next draft and providing more examples. One of the comments I received on my paper is that I focused too much on the difference between characters in
The Godfather novel and film, which I agree. My project should go into more detail about other different elements between the two forms of media since there is more than just the characters. The feedback that I am a little bit unsure about it to add more characters to analyze. I personally thing the essay analyzes enough characters as it is - the essay should instead focus a little less on characters and more on other elements.
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