Adaptation Essay Action Plan

After the peer-review, I now know what I need to do before I meet with my professor. First, I plan to break up the essay into paragraphs, each explaining a comparable aspect between the two works. My essay was a very rough draft, but it seemed a lot less structured than the essay that I reviewed. After that, I will focus on keeping the same tense throughout the essay and shortening sentences that are too long. These two aspects were the main take-aways from the review I received. After doing those two thing, I will focus my attention on restructuring sentences. I tend to overcomplicate things and think too much and that comes out in my writing. I need to go back and re-write the essay in a way that makes the content less bulky and confusing.