Action Plan - Stephen A.

Based on the feedback I received on my first draft, I now know the direction I will going with the rest of my paper. The first 800 words were just an informative section about my topic because it is not a well known story. I reported the story using quotes from news articles which is half of my comparison in terms of genre. I will not be changing a lot of my first 800 words besides making some grammatical refinements and making sure the fluidity of the story is solid enough to keep a reader's attention. The feedback I will definitely be taking is following up my first draft with an explanation and some elaboration on the comparison of news stories and songs. I will try to explain the difference of how a new's outlet tells a serious story, and how the song may take another approach and say or illustrate things that a news story typically would not.