Tyler's Action Plan

My action plan regarding the feedback on my draft is made simple by the clear and concise critique of the content in my paper. My plan primarily consists of reinforcing the strong points in my paper, which is my comparisons and contrasts to the book and television series Game of Thrones. However, a weak point in my paper was a lack of elaboration of why one genre may appeal to a wider audience as opposed to the other genre. The other aspect that I will focus on is putting more time into the draft, since during the first one I rushed through and likely left it weaker than needed. My second draft will mostly be fixing a couple errors, and building upon a valuable idea that had previously been relatively unexplored. Overall, patience and a bit more attention to details while writing are the main goal of the action plan.