Action Plan
Madison O'Brien
Based on the feedback I received, I plan on changing quite a few things in my paper. I'm definitely going to add a summary of both movies for those people who haven't seen them. I'm also going to talk more about the love story and why I think it was excluded from the later version. Overall, I need to expand more on details. All of the feedback was helpful and I will be taking all of it into consideration in my next draft.
Based on the feedback I received, I plan on changing quite a few things in my paper. I'm definitely going to add a summary of both movies for those people who haven't seen them. I'm also going to talk more about the love story and why I think it was excluded from the later version. Overall, I need to expand more on details. All of the feedback was helpful and I will be taking all of it into consideration in my next draft.
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