Action Plan - Ashia

My first draft was an outline of all my main points and subpoints. Based on the feedback I received I am going to restate my thesis, eliminate or shorten one of my main points and restructure my conclusion. My thesis statement outlined the what I wanted to talk about, but lacked reason and depth behind the discussion. I did include reasoning with the bullets under my main points but each was specific to each point. Moving on, I plan to use one reason of discussion for all my main points. While restructuring my conclusion, I plan to eliminate any new ideas I wanted to introduce and simply stick to restating the thesis statement and summarizing my main idea points. Because my point on the references to Lady Macbeth that can be seen in two main within Breaking Bad is lengthy, I plan to either eliminate the point as a whole or subpoints I had within.This would ensure I do not go over the word limit.