Bryce's Action Plan

My action plan before my next draft is to add more detail to what i already have written. My peer review partner made some good points all throughout my paper that have already been extremely helpful. A lot of the things i needed to change was just being too broad. When i got those things pointed out to me, it made me see how i can make my paper so much better as well as meeting the word count. I wrote about the Hunger Games, which is packed with information and little details that change from the book to the film. I think i really need to focus on the main things that change not the little nit pick details because there are so many.