Action plan

The feedback I got on my essay was very helpful in guiding me farther along. I had written out the points I was going to address, but the feedback really helped me to organize my essay and plan it out better. I also think it showed me the "holes" in my essay, or places that are missing additional clarification. These "holes" I would have overlooked if an outside person had not read it. Moving forward I have filled in more clarifying detail in my essays main point. As well, I am organizing each paragraph to make it easier for the reader to have a clearer understanding of what I am trying to get across. I really appreciated the notes from my first draft reader, they were in depth and thought out.